Category: English

Need to change the essay as per professor notes
I have attached 1-The instructions of the assignment.
2-The paper I submitted.
3-The professor notes.
Just follow the instructions and revise or rewrite the paragraphs as required.
It will not need a lot of word, since the material already there, and you just need to have your changes and revise.

For your formal research argument, you will select a topic, from the provided list, that is of
interest to you, which you can develop a strong hypothesis/thesis statement around. In other
words, you, acting as a researcher, will develop a research question, which you speculate the
outcome of through the research process. A research paper argues a point about a specific
hypothesis/question/stance you are taking.
Using primary and secondary sources are an integral part of the research process and complete
research paper. Papers which fail to use sources will not receive a passing grade. You are
required to use eight sources for this paper. Six must be scholarly sources. The other two can be
pop sources of your choosing so long as it pertains to your research topic. Scholarly sources
used cannot be published before 2017. Pop sources must be no more than one year old.
You will research, outline, analyze and interpret research, develop a hypothesis/thesis, connect
the research you’ve read about to your own hypothesis/thesis, and discuss your findings.
Remember, when writing a research paper, you’re not simply summarizing or reviewing
information that you have discovered. You are to take a stance on an issue. As you go through the
beginnings of the research process, keep in mind that this is meant to guide you to a discovery of
what you hoped to uncover, possibly even leading you to unexpected information. You will be
provided with a list of potential research topics to choose from. These will be rather general,
enabling you to develop your own hypothesis. Your final paper will be 6-8 pages
I already submitted a research proposal to my professor I would like it to be reviewed so it can match the research paper and give an idea of my vocabulary.  so you can match my writing style. 

Objective: Evaluate how the author’s craft creates a relevant theme in a short story and a poem. The final essay will be approximately 1,000 words. The overall essay should include the short story, the poem, and at least 2 credible and relevant sources. Each paragraph will include citations from the short story, the poem, and at least 1 supporting source. The relevance should be synthesized throughout each body paragraph. The supporting sources may not be someone else’s analysis of the text. Literary terminology should be used in the thesis, topic sentences, and throughout the body of the essay.
Submit your DRAFT here.
The overall objective:
1. Evaluate the text
2. Develop a thematic argument
3. Include at least 2 supporting researched sources that demonstrate the relevance of the theme.
4. Each body paragraph should include a minimum of 2 cited examples from the short story, the poem, and at least 1 cited supported source.
5. Supporting sources should be credible and reliable
6. At least 1 supporting source should come from SPC databases
* you have to go to the St Petersburg College (SPC) resources library and find the articles. If you can’t find any let me know!!!
Synthesis of literary devices is expected throughout the essay: thesis, topic sentences, and explanation of evidence. The analysis is a contextual analysis that will focus on the theme and relevance of the text- IT IS NOT A COMPARISON when citing in the paragraph, NO DIRECT QUOTING, SUMMARIZE.

This DBQ is the final writing assessment for the course. It is the exact same prompt you encountered early in the course in DBQ 0. This DBQ will show you how much you have grown in your ability to use a range of texts to construct an evidence-based, well-structured explanation or argument. Answering this DBQ now will give you a true sense of what you’ve learned and accomplished during the course. you are going to take the final DBQ assessment for the course. Do your best—you’ll very likely see a lot of growth since you first encountered this same DBQ at the beginning of the year. Take out the DBQ and follow the directions. You may want to review the WHP Writing Rubric to remind yourself of the criteria you are aiming for in your writing. Write and submit your essay to Score, by clicking on the DBQ Assignment in My Assignments or on the Unit page.
PROMPT: Directions: Write a five- to six-paragraph essay in response to the following prompt. Make sure to use the documents provided to help support your argument. In addition to trying to meet the criteria of the WHP Writing Rubric, make sure to address the most relevant of these historical thinking skills in your response: comparison, causation, or CCOT. Finally, make sure you contextualize (describe the broader historical context) relevant to the prompt. Make sure to write and submit your essay to Score, by clicking on the DBQ Assignment in My Assignments or the Unit page.We suggest you spend 10-15 minutes reading these documents and 35-45 minutes writing. Sources are edited for brevity and clarity.Evaluate the extent to which globalization since the Second World War has benefited everyone… BE SURE TO USE AND INCORPORATE ALL DOCUMENTS IN DBQ, IN EACH PARAGRAPH, PLEASE COPARE 2 SIMILAR DOCUMENTS, THE MORE DOCUMENTS USED THE BETTER THE GRADE, ALSO DO NOT USE HEAVY ADVANCED GRAMMAR, THIS IS FOR SOPHMORE LEVEL ENGLSIH… I WILL PROVIDE THE DOCUMENTS TO USE IN FILES.

Essay Outline:
Introduction
Attention Grabber
Thesis (Should answer the question!)
Body
Support Paragraph 1 (Should cite an example from the text)
Support Paragraph 2 (Should cite an example from the text)
Support Paragraph 3 (Should cite an example from the text)
Additional support paragraphs as needed
Conclusion
Summary/Restatement of Thesis and Supporting Ideas

This is my work that i have done in the past and I need to re write it, structure it, and resubmit it so it looks like a new piece of work. On turnit in i need 0% and plagerism also 0 please. Il submit my paper and the rubric. There also must be one page of an Abstract and il also attach a rubric to that. 

The final paper should be in word format, in no less than or no more than 5 full pages in length, double-spaced (no extra spaces between paragraphs), with 12-point Times New Roman or Georgia font, 1″ margins, and proper citations.
(NOTE: Those pages do not include, title, reference/work cited page (s), or the abstract if you choose to use one). Spelling and grammar are a part of this assignment, as incorrect usage can inhibit your ability to communicate your ideas. Make use of the rubric as it gives specific guidance about the factors that go into grading the paper. The exercise is worth 225 points towards your final grade.
Please remember to cite your sources, using MLA or APA format. you can pick a research topic from the list in the picture I send

Please read the prompt carefully and complete the assignment by engaging with 2 of the sources listed. Please read all of the instructions start to finish and let me know if you need anything else (source, material wise ect.) Thank you. 

Definition paper. Essay 1. Define abuse: Then describe specific aspects or types of abuse (can be verbal, bully, spousal, medical etc)- which in your opinion is the worse? You may choose another word to define and look at both the denotative and connotative meaning. Research peer-edited journal articles to support your point. you may also use Google Scholar OR Look up the connotative and denotative meaning of a word and describe specific aspects of both and look into how the two means became so different. (you can bring in culture or historical aspects if applicable to your word)

Please revise this no plagiarizing. Got a 58 on the first time need a better grade than that. Please and thank you.