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Personal Recount Writing In the city where I once lived, amidst a battle for survival in the heart of Kabul, deciding which side was righteous on the battlefield was a daily struggle. However, that friend did not exist in reality, as I could not talk to anybody else and could not find a way with my family or two other friends. Walking against the wind with the sand, getting in my shoes, and making the streets look like an ocean, the trip proved challenging somehow, but the end was sweet somehow. Gender stereotypes operate to make my life in Afghanistan harder and support the notion that men here should strive to accomplish their goals. In light of discrimination at schools and the lack of a decision-making process, I started thinking that it was an obstacle to personal development and, ultimately, to my objectives. I repeatedly pondered: Why do I desire such situations to recur, and why do I consistently find myself in them?
Consequently, I was vulnerable to fear because I had many doubts. It was the determination to take up the mantle of being the outsider, giving the thumbs up to their choices of the most efficient journeys if the world they wanted to see was on the other side of the planet, that was still brewing inside of them, even though their sadness masked it. Despite facing numerous challenges over these seven years, the human spirit persevered and remained unbreakable. Despite the pettiness of the action, I constantly felt the presence of inherent goodness in each of us in a way that we are all capable of.
It may seem to you that it was somehow intelligible in the past, but my life has changed quite a lot for the better since then. The walls of Kabul no longer mean anything to me because Australia is a place for people seeking a more fantastic future and hope. It was not easy throughout the trip, apart from a few positive outcomes. However, the fact that each figure embodies the human′s strong ability to press on came to my understanding. Apart from feeling safe in Australia, I have a purpose. Any improvement, no matter how small, will be just a reflection of my bold character and determination that I will not stop until I see the sun shining brighter again. I am thankful for this new country, and the opportunity prospects have given me. By comparison, my background now looks more palatable. Tenacity and decision have enabled me to find peace amidst war and storm, overcoming obstacles to forge a new path filled with success and hope.
Commentary
Regarding my narrative writing approach, I tried to investigate themes of place, identity, and belonging. I was able to immerse myself in the narrative and experience it from a broad viewpoint by telling it from my point of view as a refugee in the first person. My intended audience was those who could identify with the migrant experience because it is a subject many people can connect to, especially those who have comparably immigrated to Australia. So, recounting my experience involved much more than just telling my tale. It was an opportunity for me to illustrate my struggles and experiences. In the city where I once lived, amidst a battle for survival in the heart of Kabul, deciding which side was righteous on the battlefield was a daily struggle.″
The quote I′ve chosen shows how I used the first-person voice in my story. Starting with ″In the city where I once lived″ helps readers feel connected to my experiences. Using ″I″ emphasizes that this is my own perspective, allowing me to share the emotional challenges of living in a conflicted place like Kabul.
I made a great effort to conjure solid feelings and vivid images using the language I used to describe the incident. The use of emotive language allows the reader to fully immerse themselves in the intensity of my experiences, while desсrіptive imagery vividly illustrates the narrative′s goals and problems. However, the vivid and meaningful rhetorical questions and analogies drew the reader in to explore the ideas of tenacity and optimism.
The story used a combination of formal prose and colloquial language to convey the ambiguity of my experience. I used many colloquial terms to reflect and capture the spirit of my Australian lifestyle. However, I regularly employed formal language to highlight the gravity of these issues and the relevance of the remedies discovered in this nation. Through the harmony of these language components, the story attempts to connect with various individuals and the ideas of tenacity and change in general.
I want you to make my commentary in this level on this skill . In formal language or English.
And first paragraph you have to talk about Form , Audience , Purpose
Second paragraph on third part of you have to talk about language technique you have to focus on all paragraph how what you write why you write how you write this is the main focus you on it. Key skills
Reflect on and share the
implications of authorial choices made in their own writing and in the writings of others : Explains the value of writing processes through the experience of creating a text and considers other writing processes.
Explain and comment on the vocabulary, text structures and language features,
conventions and ideas used in their own writing: Discusses how structures, language features, vocabulary and conventions were purposefully employed to convey ideas.
Experiment with and extend vocabulary for effective and cohesive writing: Connects precise language, register, structure and ideas to reflect on the writing processes.

What is it? As you all know, this course is largely centered around case studies. 
For the final project I would like you to do a “presentation” or paper (but I prefer a presentation) on a case study of your choosing. 
2. Tell us more about the presentation/paper? As I have mentioned I prefer a presentation to a final paper, but the option is yours. If you choose to do a presentation, you have a few options: You can record a voice over a Prezi and/or Google Slides. Or your you can film yourself giving the presentation, or make a youtube video – it’s entirely up to you. If you choose to do a paper, please treat it the same way as any research paper. 
3. How long should it be? 10-15 minutes if it’s a presentation. 10-14 pages if it’s a paper 
4. What are examples of acceptable case studies? As mentioned before, there are a number of case studies we have read about and gone over this semester: FTX, Citicorp, Challenger, Ford Pinto Scandal, Beech Nut, Deepwater Horizon/BP Oil Spill (to name a few)…Every week there are new examples of case studies from which you can choose. Please do NOT choose a case study we have already covered. 
5. What should the presentation cover? The basics – in a 10-15 minute presentation, there is only so much ground to cover, but you should be able to cover at least the basics and the ethical implications of a case study. What happened, how did it happen, who was involved, etc. In past semesters students have used potter boxes as well as a way to cover the ethical dilemma, but that is not necessary. Again, think of the information that needs to be relayed in order to be able for an audience to understand and to have a discussion about the case study of your choosing.
Examples are uploaded and attached.