“The Power of Personal Anecdotes: Exploring the Impact of Real-Life Stories in Discursive Writing”

-Im doing a discursive essay
-edit add in more vivid examples bring it to a 90 mark
Hearing actual event 
Personal anecdote
Happiness pat on the shoulder
More specific
Example
Bring it to life
Entertain the reader with examples of personal anecdotes elaborate
Less repetition
Specify it more
How people have affected us, etc