Article Selected: “The American Healthcare Industry Is Killing People” (Smith, 2020) Title: “Revamping the American Healthcare Industry: Addressing Systemic Issues to Improve Patient Outcomes” Changes to be Made: 1. Structural

Revision can be structural or content-related. Read the provided articles and select one that you would revise.
“We Can Improve Healthcare. It Just Takes Compromise” 
“Why It’s Wrong to Blame Mass Killings on Mental Illness” https://www.cjr.org/analysis/mass-killings-mental-illness.php
“The American Healthcare Industry Is Killing People”
Attached are the files for the first and third articles. 
Discussion Prompts
Identify which article you selected, including an in-text citation, and the full reference correctly at the end of your post.
Explain what you would change, add, or remove, and why.
Does the claim need a qualifier? Is more evidence needed to support the argument? Does it address opposing views fairly, or at all?
How will you utilize these revision skills in your future career as a nurse?

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