The Last Straw: A Critical Analysis of Alice Wong’s Memoir In her memoir “The Last Straw,” disability rights activist Alice Wong shares her personal experiences and insights as a disabled woman living in the United States. Through her raw and honest storytelling

Follow Instructions to write and essay about “The Last Straw” by Alice Wong
This is a rewrite. Adding Ethos, Pathos and Logos.
Can you fix the essay with the teachers notes in mind.
“The writing is considered plagiarized since it does not include any in-text citations to comply with the MLA format to identify all places where you are relying on information from sources. It also relies too heavily on quotations, not paraphrases and summaries. There is no bolded thesis.”