“My Superhero in Spirit: How My Dad Continues to Inspire Me” Dear Admissions Committee, As I sit down to write this essay, I am filled with both pride and sadness. Pride, because I have the opportunity to share

The fake audience is  someone reviewing my college application
It’s an essay about how my dad is my superhero. 
my dad is deceased but he was my superhero in so many ways
use dialogue while giving an example of some ways he’s helped me and how I learned from it