Title: The Power of Music: An Analysis of the Influence of Songwriting on Society

–              Revise work cited page with proper mLA 9 formats with the links.
–              Rewrite the essay with the proper format (hook, introduction, thesis, body paragraphs containing topic sentences for each body paragraph, conclusion)
–              The comments are made on the essay for revision please check that
The comment our teacher has made:
“Much of this essay is improved! I am, however, still missing one major element to this cause–cause and effect.
X) Cause and Effect Structure: This paper presents itself as more of a summary “this is what the song is about” rather than, this is what influence or caused the songwriter to create this song. In the end, the song is the larger effect.”