“The Dependence on Technology” Life Line Needing you near, Not just an accessory, But a vital part of my day, Every morning and every night, I check to make sure you’re within reach. Without you, I feel lost

For this assignment you are to revise one of the first two poem drafts you’ve submitted using Carmen Giménez’s “Twenty-Two Poem Hacks” as a guide. Your revision should apply at least three of Giménez’s “poem hacks,” then write a paragraph on why you chose each specific “hack.”  Post your revised poem as a word document or pdf.
Please use this for revision- 
Life Line 
Needing you near
Not quite an accessory 
Depending on you and checking to see if your there 
Every morning, 
Every night 
making sure your always near 
When your not there and the time is up 
It forces me to look back and see my reflection in a rectangle 
You provide a connection for the power and my souce of happines 
My beautiful charger, you are everything and more
Without you my world feels quite 
Without you i’m forced to look around, 
yet i’m not ready to see the word in this state