“Revised Essays: Creating Comprehensive and Cohesive Writing” Introduction Writing is a crucial skill that is required in various aspects of life, from academic assignments to professional documents. However, it is not uncommon for students to struggle with creating comprehensive

Essay #1 and Essay #2 have already been revised for their errors. They just need to be rewritten to match the professor’s needs and enable it to be a comprehensive essay. Don’t make a lot of changes to the original text if it hasn’t been annotated for a change unless you need to for clarity issues or to rephrase certain sentences please inform me of the change if so. I will attache the revisal for both essays.