Revised Essay: The Importance of Education in Society Education plays a crucial role in shaping individuals and societies. It equips individuals with the necessary knowledge, skills, and values to lead successful and fulfilling lives. In this essay, we will explore

Need to change the essay as per professor notes
I have attached 1-The instructions of the assignment.
2-The paper I submitted.
3-The professor notes.
Just follow the instructions and revise or rewrite the paragraphs as required.
It will not need a lot of word, since the material already there, and you just need to have your changes and revise.