“Enhancing Your Thesis Paper: Introducing a Categorical Rule, Offering a Call to Action, and Polishing Between Topics/Paragraphs”

Hi she gave me the full points for my essay. For the same essay, she wants us to introduce a categorical rule as it applies to my topic, offer a call to action, polish between topics/paragraphs. my feedback from sending my paper twice said well done! keep up the good work. I will send a screenshot for clearer instrauctions. I will also send a screenshot for what was required the 2 times I sent the paper but earned the full 120pts. The  focus is on thesis paper 3 although she graded me the full points for sending the paper twice as thesis paper 1 and thesis paper 2.