“Enhancing Teaching and Learning: A Critical Case Study Analysis”

I have completed my case study paper but I need someone to check and maybe give me some suggestions in order to get a higher grade. Please edit the paper based on the following criterias:
1.    
Demonstrate critical understanding and
specialised knowledge in your area of study2.   Demonstrate critical understanding
of a key aspect of teaching and learning within your subject and/or age phase
3.   Demonstrate ability to select
appropriate resources, methodologies, strategies and techniques for the study
(including engaging in practitioner/action research)
4.   Demonstrate the ability to
evaluate critically the outcomes of your study
Please highlight the parts you changed in the paper including the bibliography. Thank you.